Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied
with their lives than people were in the past.
Over the past years, the issue of whether or not by changing and improving technology and the world, humans become more anxious and unsatisfied than the previous generation has a great deal of attention from psychologists and sociologists. Although some may say that since the world become change so quickly, people would tolerate some pressure from these changes; I, as well as many others, believe that by changing the world human life becomes easier than past, so they are happier and more satisfied than past.
First of all, an important reason why human life is easier than past is that they have more facilities for achieving easier their life. By improving technology, many facilities such as the washing machine, the vacuum, the dishes machine and may other items like this are invented. These items have a duty that changing human life to easier comparative than the previous generation. So, people need to consume less time doing homework such a washing dishes or clothes; hence, they have much time for doing extra activities like doing sports, playing music, going on trips. As a result, new generation life’s is more happy and satisfied than past.
Another reason for this point of view is that by changing world do quickly people have able to connect without problems. One of the main aim and goal of improving technology and the world is that people can see and connect far from distance anytime and anywhere they want. For these approaches, mobile phone, lab top and the internet are invented, also many applications and soft wards are introduced to people to connect. Consider Skype soft ward, for instance. When one wants to see each other all around the world, they only need to connect to the internet and start to see and speak with others without considering the distance between them. Therefore, the current world changes not only have made life easier but also have made it more enjoyable.
Finally, it is occasionally said that besides improving technology medical science also improve quickly these days. In the past, the mortality rate was at a high level. People have died from some routine disease such as a cold, influenza, heart attack, blood pressure, and many other items like these. By improving the world and medical science, many diseases are cured with small pills or syrup. Furthermore, difficult and hazardous illness such as cancer, MS, and many other items cure or control easier than in past and patient do not need to suffer pain because of their illness; so that by improving the world quickly people can feel more comfortable and satisfied compere their parents or grandparents.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that people are living happier and more satisfied these days than in the past chiefly due to different improvement in their lifestyle which is resulted from the world quick changes.
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- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Over the past years, the issue of whether or not by changing and improving technology an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0622406639 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48894873207 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49377593361 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2579915395 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.421052632 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3684210526 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325043934508 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953661333384 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751534567111 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190564569472 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382181404762 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.