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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Various people have different ideas about a given subject because they look at the matter through different lenses. A wide variety of factors such as knowledge, creativity and innovation affect the ones' ideas about the subject. Some people think that having a passionate interest in something is the most important contributive factor in bringing up the best idea in that. Nevertheless, others holding a different viewpoint, believe that being interest is not an affective factor in making the excellent ideas. I, personally believe that interest plays a vital role in making a good idea about a particular thing because of two conspicuous reasons that I will elaborate on which in the future paragraphs.
To begin with, people who are interested in some area usually have talent in that area too, which helps them to make better ideas in comparison to others. Some people endowed some special abilities in a particular field and because they are aware of their talent, they will be interested in that field. These people inherently have many good ideas in that field because they can think creatively about that. A personal example can drive this notion home. When I was a child, I was passionate about cooking, and sometimes my mother let me make meals. When I made foods without previous knowledge, she was surprised. Not only did I all the steps true, but I also mixed the spice very well and made a portion of delicious food. Therefore, due to my talent, I am a chief now, and owing to my best ideas in the formulation of new foods and a combination of different ingredients so as to reach to the best taste and flavor, I have won numerous prizes in this area.
Second, individuals try to collect information about things that they are passionate about them, therefore, they will be more knowledgable in that area. When people are interested in a given field they always pay attention to all aspects of that, and as a result, have a better perspective about that. Clearly, when people are cognizant of all details of an especial matter, they have good ideas in that respect. To elucidate on, my brother is enamored in mechanic and car-producing technology. Since he was a child, he always was studying the motor of cars and the methods of boosting their productivity. He studied mechanical engineering at university and started to work immediately after graduation. Now he is a famous engineer because of his innovative ideas in his major.
In conclusion, I do believe that being interested in something leads to making the best ideas in that field. People who are captivated in something not only are talented in that field, but they also have extra information about different aspects of that field. Hence, they are capable to make the best ideas about that.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 875, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... a combination of different ingredients so as to reach to the best taste and flavor, I h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...ng technology. Since he was a child, he always was studying the motor of cars and the meth...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88322717622 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73398570036 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473460721868 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7554261472 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186328626193 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605878694965 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611465388108 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136167264345 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423255438878 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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