The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
In this contemporary world, everyone likes to explore and visit new places.The invent of modern transportation and globalisation has brought the people across the globe in a shorter period of time. There are varied interests among people when they plan such trips. Some people may feel comfortable to travel on their own without a tour guide and some argue that travelling with the tour guide is the best way.I, however prefer to travel on my own without a tour guide due to the following reasons.
People these days prefer to spend their free time with their family and peers during their vacation. Exploring new places rejuvenate the mind and body. There are plenty of travelogues and websites available these days which provide information about any place we visit. The websites like trip advisor give plenty of information about the place, the attractions nearby and things to do, places to eat. People even pour their reviews about the location because of which we can visit and explore the place on our own. This hardly necessitates the need of a guide to wander around. The welcome center available in most of the places even provide pamphlets about the location. For instance, when I travelled to a recreation park nearby, I learnt all possible information from the websites and the pamphlets from their visitor center. This not only facilitated me to visit all the attractions in the recreation area but also sustained the thrill of exploring the area on my own.The tour was full of surprises and I was astound to see the places. The need for a tour guide was of trivial importance when we have all these possible resources.
Admittedly, the tour guide can provide us lots of information because he must have been familiar with the location and know the intricate details of the area. He may have plenty of contacts to make things easier for us by saving time. However, the thrill of exploring the new place on our own is lost. Moreover, we may not be able to spend some extra time in the location when the tour guide take us along with other tourists. We may be even forced to stay or eat in the location the guide take us. Many a times, we may miss out things the guide had not unveiled. Having a tourist guide constantly with us may also affect our privacy. These guides also demand some money for the information we could get easily through the internet.
To sum up, having a tour guide may be helpful for some people. However with the availability of plenty of information from the websites and blogs, we can easily enjoy the fun of exploring and visitng places on our own
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71806167401 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49352827261 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455947136564 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7773225361 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7391304348 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941586711685 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243652511703 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569267031185 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754676496173 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730811268917 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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