Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
new Roman","serif"">The rapid evolution of technology, faster growing population, increasing competition for employment in the last few decades has challenged mankind in numerous ways. these challenges had never allowed people to enjoy the complete happiness and always made them lead a unsatisfactory life. it remains a mystery still whether the rapid changes are the boon or bane to the society. In my opinion, people today are less happier than the people in the past due to the following reasons.
new Roman","serif"">first of all, with the growing technology and its upgradations, grows the demand to update new things and techniques. Most of the people especially from the past generation find it difficult to learn the new technologies and the techniques. In the digital world, where everything is dependent on internet and gadgets, more and more learning curve is needed to perform the tasks. For instance, we recently planned for a family vacation to a hill station. From the flight tickets to the hotel rooms, everything had to be booked online. my father though highly educated, found it really arduous to book by himself and hence he sought my help to book the tickets. he was unhappy with the entire process being digitalised as he was not familiar with the steps.
new Roman","serif"">moreover, there are new technologies and new versions of mobile phones introduced every now and then. Samsung itself releases 2 to 3 versions of mobile phones in a year. Couple of decade ago, when I bought my first mobile phone, there were very few models alone in the market. However the wide range of makes and models of mobile phones confused me a lot and I was puzzled to select one among that. this results in more expenditure and also creates lot of electronic waste.
new Roman","serif"">Even in education, there is a constant change in the concepts and advancements which necessitate more and more degrees. For example , I did my undergraduation in dentistry. With the advances in the profession, I had to do postgraduation to further upgrade my knowledge and later on with the introduction of implants, I had to further my studies on implants. With the eternal demand to learn and upgrade, I lost all the fun in life.
new Roman","serif"">moreover, the exponential increase in the number of industries, have increased the amount of pollutants in the air and water that had further deteriorated the health of mankind. this is evident from the increase in the incidence of various respiratory diseases and cancer which perplexed the human race these days. though these factories provide employment to many, the setbacks coming with them cannot be denied. The huge increase in automobiles also exhaust lot of air polluting the air furthermore.
new Roman","serif"">To sum up, the world is growing at a fast pace, demanding the human race to chase behind the rapidly evolving scenario. this has confused and challenged the mankind in many ways without any doubt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2680.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49180327869 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.33717414739 2.67179642975 200% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551229508197 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 832.5 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7332284593 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881184000276 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312097586528 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513082877381 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484433849955 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467007541496 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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