Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
History is the study of the past which describes the culture and tradition of a nation. Some may support the fact that history should be a part of university education and some may disagree this. However, I support the latter as learning history is not of any significance when an individual chose a different field of study in the university.
First of all, learning history apart from the major field of study may not be beneficial to the student. Imposing a subject which is not of an individual’s interest, merely is a waste of time and money. For example, I learnt history all through my school days as a part of social sciences. But later on I chose to study dental medicine for which I paid lot of attention in science subjects. Studying history is not beneficial for students who wish to pursue in health sector like mine.
Besides, learning an extra subject in university is of trivial importance when compared to the major field of study. Also, the student already may have taken huge loans for his higher education. Studying an additional subject may force the student to pay additional fee along with his regular tuition fees. Forcing the students to learn an additional subject may be compelling and irritating. Students may simply copy the assignments from others to finish their work. In this competitive world with lots of unemployment, overburdening the students with additional subjects may affect their interest in learning their subjects of interest.
In most of the nations, history is taught as a honor or pride of the nation. History teaches about the origin, the culture, the wars and the kings. Government has made it mandatory to learn history in schools to spread the pride of their country to students.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that learning an extra subject which is not of their field of study may not provoke any interest for the student and it is going to be an additional burden for them. History should be a part of the curriculum for school students and not for the university students as a vocational subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'supports'.
Suggestion: supports
...ure and tradition of a nation. Some may support the fact that history should be a part ...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...st of the nations, history is taught as a honor or pride of the nation. History t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86440677966 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75651796056 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460451977401 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7330238417 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6315789474 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208047726068 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761524710807 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467201059046 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13274720448 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385727977508 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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