In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
In this competitive world with ever growing challenges in the work atmosphere, executing a work with utmost perfection is so vital to sustain the competition. There is always a debate as to whether perform a task quickly even though it invites some mistakes than to perform it slowly and perfectly. I however support the second notion due to the following reasons.
First of all, the growing competition in procuring a job demands highly skilled individuals. Only by executing a work slowly, some one can do it with perfection. This enables an individual to give importance to each and every detail of the work. nevertheless, if someone is always in a hurry to execute a task, he may miss out certain minute details and intricacies related with the job. As it is evident from the proverb,” Haste makes waste”. For example, if doctors perform their surgeries faster without being cautious about the vital organs, they can commit a lot of mistakes which can cost even the life of their patients and those mistakes are not reversible. So delivering the work with perfection is more important than the speed of execution.
Moreover, the mushrooming of corporate companies has increased the competition among them, which in turn has imposed tedious tasks and deadlines. This in turn has indirectly increased the work pressure among the employees as all these deadlines determine their appraisals and promotions. These employees often execute their tasks in a haste not worrying about their perfection. The fixture of these mistakes are often time-consuming and demands a huge cost. My friend who is a software engineer performed a task faster to finish before the deadline. While doing so, she did a mistake in running the code which in turn resulted in a program with an error for more than a week. A week later, when the problem was diagnosed, she and her team had to work continuously for a month to rectify the error and also to design a new code. This resulted in a wastage of huge sum of money.
Admittedly, working on a task faster can help us stand apart from our competitors. This can also assist us to perform more work than others. Such a fast performance can not only affect the quality of the job but also the health of the individual. The person may slowly lose his passion to do the task since the work becomes more chaotic.
To sum up, the slower execution of work is more important to do it without errors as performing the work perfectly at the first shot itself makes one successful. Hasty and imperfect work not only is a waste of time and money but also makes the individual unsuccessful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, apart from, as to, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82888888889 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77904770971 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515555555556 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8640828098 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5416666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27738641922 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777401750793 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729772209649 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175191561291 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622541488969 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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