Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To agree or disagree with the statement that movies and television have negative effects than postitive effects on the way young people behave brings a controversial debate because of its pros and cons. Movies and television has tremendous impact these days on young people as they spend lot of their free time in front of the television. I, however believe that they have a significant negative impact on young people than the positive effect.
First of all, kids spend their off time watching movies and television. They get easily lured by the television and do not develop any skills or hobbies. They are attracted by the reel life heroes and dream of a life that may not exist in reality. Most of the movies portray the hero as a bravo, the one who constantly fight against the enemy. This unnecessary sows violence and hatred as a heroic behaviour. Nowadays, many kids watch WWF in television, which in turn, brings lot of hatred and enmity among their peers.
Besides, television and movies always consume lot of time which may later affect their grades in the school or university. The student may remain a couch potato watching the television series without learning the lessons or skills. This also affects their communication with the friends and family. This reduces their participation in physical activities like sports and excercise leading to obesity. The proclivity towards television and movies prevents them from learning new hobbies too.
Media depicts certain music shows and video jockeys as a most important profession in the world by advsertising them again and again. This in turn kindle the interests of some young people to think those trivial things as life and go behind only those jobs vividly even though they are not proficient in those fields. Recently, I met my uncle whose son left his studies to participate in a music concert and later got rejected in the show as well. He lost one academic year in this dilemma.
The young people in my community imitate the reel life heroes and heroines in the way they dress up, talk, behave and walk. The advertisements portrayed by their hero force them to buy those products, which in turn impact the economy of the family as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91466666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52156424115 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7378788487 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212457468324 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611121720235 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104615673412 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119924161165 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147896659638 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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