the best way to travel is in a group led by tour guide
Nowadays most of people like to travel in the world. Most of peope make travel to thier pleasure and get good knowledge about the places in the world. I agree with the statment which says the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First when we are traveling with the group with tour guide, its help to make safely travel. If we travel alone and have to face any injured, noone have to help. But wile traveling we get injerd or sick, others will get care of us. Even tour guide also know the place where have to take person who had get sick or injeared. My own experinceis a compelling example of this. My mother went dabadiwa for see the religious places with travel group under tour guide. On this time my mother get bad flem. She feel to breath dificult. On that time she took to the hospital person who guide the group and gave tretment by hospital. Orthers who in group helped her to do her day to day work.Therefore, she didn't face any bad situationon this trip. She came safely and enjoyed lot.
Secondly, people can save their time by seaching or traveling to unwanted places. When tour guide is there man, they know the main places can cover the with in time period. Also, they know the valuble places. Also, they safe us from who are doing trade of deceiving. If we travel to first time in to some other country. When we seach the places through website which we can go, there are many places. Some time we don't know the validity of visiting. If not we have to refere the documents or seach about the places. Sometimes we can get bad food and acomadention while going alone. It can creat bad situvation to us.For instance, my family went to trip in Lagala. Before we travel to there, we booked the stay home through website. Then we visited the place which we booked. It was horible. It was not like as they put photos in the website. It was very dirty. But we don't have to face it if we go through the tour guide.
In conclusion, I stongly belive that when people travel with group have to led by tour guide. This is becouse we can travel with safe and save the time by guide proper way to travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
Nowadays most of people like to travel in the world. Most of pe...
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Suggestion: got; gotten
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Suggestion: got; gotten
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...n this time my mother get bad flem. She feel to breath dificult. On that time she to...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...up helped her to do her day to day work.Therefore, she didnt face any bad situationon thi...
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...o do her day to day work.Therefore, she didnt face any bad situationon this trip. She...
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...like as they put photos in the website. It was very dirty. But we dont have to fac...
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Suggestion: don't
... the website. It was very dirty. But we dont have to face it if we go through the to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31654676259 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12940728312 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455635491607 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9397069092 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.5454545455 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6363636364 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12121212121 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294772217008 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734620579041 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107885273153 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251819636776 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124961046578 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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