The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Over the past several decades, our society has witnessed and experienced radical changes in each and every aspect of our lives. One of the most noticeable changes that can be seen in society is the number of people who travel abroad as a hobby. Regarding this issue, some people hold the opinion that traveling alone is the best way to enjoy one's trip. Personally however, I believe that it is better to travel in a group led by a tour guide than to travel by oneself. I feel this way mainly because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
In the first place, it is an undeniable fact that modern people have very hectic lives and schedules. As a matter of fact, they usually lack the time to plan their holidays. Nevertheless, tour guides, who already have in-depth knowledge about a country, can make one's trip scheduling for them and thus, enable busy people to avoid getting stressed. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I decided to go on a summer vacation to Mexico with my coworker. At that time, we were both working in a very important project, and consequently, had no spare time to plan our trip schedule. As the days went by, we started to get very stressed and worried as we did not know in which hotel we were going to sleep or what activities we were going to enjoy. Therefore, in the end, we decided to travel in a group led by a tour guide. In other words, group tours give modern people the opportunity to avoid getting stressed and to save time.
In the second place, from my point of view, traveling with a group can guarantee people's safety and comfort. To be more precise, a tour guide usually speaks several languages and possesses detailed knowledge about the visiting country's culture. As a result, people do not have to worry about the possible problems or dangers that they may experience as tour guides can solve everything for them. To illustrate this point, I will give a personal example. A few years ago, I took a trip to Brasil with a group tour lead by a guide. On the first day of the trip, I was bitten by a snake and thus, had to visit a hospital. If I had been alone, I would not have been able to communicate with the doctors nor call 911. Stated differently, traveling in a group led by a tour guide is the safest way to enjoy a holiday.
To conclude, although it is true that one may not be able to enjoy freedom and liberty during group tours, I believe that a person can save time and ensure his or her safety by traveling in this way. Therefore, based on the arguments mentioned above, I deeply agree with the statement that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...raveling alone is the best way to enjoy ones trip. Personally however, I believe tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, i feel, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, it is true, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41129032258 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45346916144 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5851366298 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70833333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394717322163 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115843368954 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155536387241 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276322845302 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991455086555 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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