The best way to travel is in a group led by a travel guide

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a travel guide

Most of us wait for a whole year for the opportunity to travel during the vacation, but our preferences in how to organize this endeavor are different. Personally, I prefer to travel alone since travelling in a group led by a guide has some disadvantages. My choice is explained by the facts that travelling as an individual gives me a chance to rest; it enables to concentrate on the sites you visit; and it helps save money.
To begin with, travelling is a form of relaxation, and it is possible only when nobody disturbs you during that event. If you are surrounded with a lot of other people during your vacation you will not be able to relax, forget your daily routine, and your obligations at your work /in the workplace/. For exmaple, I work in a legal company as a lawyer and my obligations include meeting a lot of people and discussing with them a lot of issues. As a result, at the end of the working week I fell exhausted and need to stay alone to rest. Thus, in order to relax while travelling one should travel alone.
Additionally, it is impossible to focus on the places you visit while travelling, if you are permanently in a group of strangers. This is explained by the fact that other people ask questions about the places you visit, have a talk with each other - all of these does not allow you to fully appreciate the beauty of sites you have a trip to. For instance, when I first visited Greece, a country with extremely rich culture and history, I understood merely nothing from my trip since I was accompanied by other tourists who were talking, eating and quarelling with each other all the time. So, I realized that in order to enjoy the places you go you should be separated from large groups of other visitors.
Finally, travelling alone without a tour guide lets you /to/ save your money. Everyone knows that hiring a guide is an expensive service that is not always affordable. In my country, for example, it costs a lot to be accompanied by a professional who may explain to you the pecularities of the sites you see. Sometimes the price is equal to your all other expanses during the trip. Thus, travelling alone excludes the mentioned expenses.
To sum up briefly, of course there would be some advantages to travelling in a group with a guide. However, I strongly believe that travelling alone is the best option because it gives you a chance to have a real rest, to enjoy fully your trip and because it is a more affordable option.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, as a result, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55056179775 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69997333684 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0409644835 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.578947368 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232666490064 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958712404614 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119183026092 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160770029168 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986707871984 0.0645574589148 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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