Better to travel alone than with a group of people and a guide
In the current era, technological advances have brought the world closer to us. It is easier to spend vacation, travel the world, know the unknown, and see the unseen. Some people believe that it is helpful to travel alone and not travelling with a group of people along with a tourist guide. I absolutely disagree with this prompt as i amthink that there are several benefits of spending vacation with a group of people. I will illustrate three important reason for this belief in the following paragraphs.
First of all, globalisation and internet facilities have transformed our work station into a virtual world. Hence, the communication with people have become limited resulting in a monotonous mundane life. Therefore, when we plan a guided vacation with a group of people of people, we develope opportunities to live life fully and meet real people. For instance, couple of months back me and my family went on a vacation to visit Interlaken in Switzerland. The tour had a group of 20 people and a guide was assigned. The long cherished time with the group has brought the families closer to each other as we stayed connected even several months after the trip has ended.
Secondly, planning a trip to an unknown land requires a significant amount of research about all the details about the location. Amidst a busy schedule, it is hard task to successfully complete the research and execute a plan. Therefore, a guide will act as an aid as he has sound knowledge about the location and various viewing location around the area. On the otherhand, individual planning have the proability of missing out on several detailsdue to lack of knowledge about the location.
Finally, travelling with a group of people can be safe and have several health benefits. In case of any medical emergency, the group can take responsibility in taking care and medicating the ill person In addition, if there is a theft or roberry, the entire group can assist each other and help the individual during the financial crisis. On the otherhand, travelling alone may lack all these advantages.
In conclusion, taking a short trip away from the routine schedule can refresh the mind. When travelling to a new place, it is a great idea to travel with a bunch of people as the trip becomes fun filled, enjoying the minute serenity of the location, advantage of meticulous detailed experience of the trip, and help with any emergency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of people'.
Suggestion: of people
... we plan a guided vacation with a group of people of people, we develope opportunities to live life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92926829268 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78284987389 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5322874497 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.05 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350413607763 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101206133372 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120539747997 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18733740715 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988998078835 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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