Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's modern world has made humankind enter a new highly advanced technological era. The availability of internet has uplifted every human life. However, some people still believe the rapid advancements of technology has dwindled the creative skill of children, when compared with the past. Nevertheless, I strongly assert that access to technology has drastically improved the creative skill in young minds. There are mainly three reasons for by belief which will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.
First of all, free access to internet has mushroomed all over the world. Therefore, everyone has a smart phone to use innumerable information available via internet. Children today can learn artificial intelligence and machine learning at a very young age, which was difficult to imagine in the past decades. For instance, my nine years old son completed a machine learning project with a group of project development team at Yahoo. Gaining knowledge through online classes have enhanced his imagination and product development skill at such a young age.
Secondly, children's education can be successfully completed by studying from a remote location, rather than going to schools. For example, for past few decades in developing countries, there has been poor infrastructure and limited mentors in a rural schools. Therefore, the children in such schools lack proper education and could never graduate. However, with the availability of free internet, those students can learn their academic knowledge without visiting school. The autobiography of Swami Kedarnath from Uttarakhand is a living proof of that.
Finally, technology has helped children enhance their imagination skill. Virtual class from motivators accross the world have helped young children pursue their dream. Therefore, many people are focusing on building new start up companies to employ the unemployed, thereby uplifting their colony. Many children are also focusing their education on decreasing the air pollution by introducing electric cars.
In conclusion, technological advancement has come to humankind as a gift. It has proved to be highly advantageous for the young children compared to adults. By learn complex mechanism of robotics, remotely completing academic education without visiting school, and helping in development of the society, today's children have proved that with the help of technology and internet, they can reach the sky one day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'school'?
Suggestion: school
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Line 10, column 167, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to complex'
Suggestion: to complex
...g children compared to adults. By learn complex mechanism of robotics, remotely complet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65040650407 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94412235389 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590785907859 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7036543065 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7727272727 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146591570475 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041812834373 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354759320203 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855194094701 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450381879688 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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