childhood is the most beautiful time of a person's life. Do you agree?
In my opinion, childhood is the most beautiful time in my life; I lived in my childhood one of my best significant moments that happened to me in my life.Although these events occurred to me from a long time I still memorized it until now.
First, I enjoyed in my childhood with playing football and also swimming in the pool.Every Thursday, when I meet my family members at the end of the week and playing football in the garden of our home, this is most excellent time to me.Also, I loved my uncle very much always says jokes to me and makes me laugh all the time.My uncle is a professional swimmer and taught me the swimming in the pool.I am considering that the swimming is my favorite sport in my life, in fact, I liked it because of his encouragement, and this helped me to get trophies in swimming competitions when I was young.As a result, I think that my family especially my uncle and also my parents assisted me to feel happy in the childhood.
Additionally, my father is the best mate for me, and now he was dead.My father was taking me every Friday when I was ten years old, going with me to the cinema in the morning to watch animation movies, this type of films is the most preferred movies to me until now.Moreover, when we return to home, my mom is making pizza to us.I like pizza.I think that if I was able to eat it every day, I will do this because I believe pizza very delicious and make me happy.In the evening, we are enjoying with watching matches in our club; my club is organizing a small event called challenge champion every Friday.I savored to attend challenges like these matches; it's interesting to me and also to my father.I think that these memories very linked to me through my life until now.
Finally, I am unfortunate because these beautiful events in my childhood were over and switched to just memories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, still, i think, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47928994083 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65547996122 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.1344086022 417% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.217687478 48.9658058833 587% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 378.5 100.406767564 377% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.5 20.6045352989 410% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.75 5.45110844103 417% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113699093547 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100894122403 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624866194323 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100894122403 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624866194323 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 11.7677419355 356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.14 58.1214874552 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 10.1575268817 332% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.89 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.0537634409 354% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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