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In your opinion, which modern invention or scientific discovery has affected society the most?
In modern world various invention brought revolution to our society. however, in my opinion, internet is huge invention happened in our society. As we say, “coin has two sides.” Same way internet also has both good and bad effects on us. I will elaborate my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, internet has brought lot of comfort to our lives. we can use internet through various mediums such as computer, tablet, mobile phone and many more. With the help of internet people can save their time and money. For example, if I want to book tickets for any concert then I can book from home through internet. Additionally, people have online baking most convenient option. they do not have run to the ATM or bank to withdraw money. Once, I went to supermarket and I forgot my purse at home. I was not having any cash in my pocket. At that time, I used online cash pay option from my mobile phone.
Further, internet is also valuable for students for their education. On internet students can excess numerous material for their study. For example, there are various sites and online library on which they can use books and papers for their study. For example, when I was preparing for my TOEFL exam I used online library books and exams. Not only that, but internet also give convince to travel. we can book our ride online and hotels in which we would like to live. On top of that Google maps is most known application to find out map of our destination.
Beside that internet is also helpful in businesses. online shopping is a trend in today’s generation. amazon is the most famous known online brand. On amazon people can buy and sell their products. Apart from that people can make their own online site and sell their products. Person who buy a product from online, they can review on that site about product. This information can help other people who would like to buy that product.
however, internet also has few demerits. today’s generation has become addicted to the internet. internet distract people from their work and education. For example, one of my friend is always busy in social networking site and because of that he got low grades in his university program. Not only that even children are attracted to internet. they like to play online games. which makes them inactive and introvert.
Let’s put in nut shell, internet brought excess to information even in developing countries of world. According to me, internet has abundant merits compare to demerits. Based on that I strongly believe that internet is the invention which has widely affected the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84855233853 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51632730692 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498886414254 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7589714529 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8378378378 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1351351351 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.02702702703 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0504193542045 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163495814369 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031329758561 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351818958517 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233581407923 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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