children should not be allowed to play with computer games, because playing computer games is a waste of time
Having glimpse of the game situation in the world, we will be marveled at the variety of computer games that children like. In today’s world, playing computer games is an integral part of children’s daily life. Many children like to play computer games when they have leisure time. recently, a controversial proposal was brought to public eye, suggesting that children should not be allowed to play with them in that playing computer games is a waste of time. From my point of view, I cannot agree with it more because playing computer games cost much money and time.
To begin with, playing computer games leads children to bad performance in school. Nowadays, computer games become more fancy and attractive than they were before. Therefore, many children cannot resist to the beautiful characters and exciting plot as well as fancy clothes in the games. As a result, children become addicted to computer games and spend much time on it. Some of them virtually spend all their time on games instead of doing homework or reading, which leads to failure in exams. For example, my brother was addicted to Overwatch, a famous shooting game, when he was in high school. He hardly did homework or reviewed for tests at home because he devoted all his time to games. Without a doubt, he got many Ds in his final exams.
Furthermore, playing games costs much money, which even leads to crime. To illustrate, everyone in this world wants to be stronger. This is same with virtual characters in the games. Children would invest their pocket money in order to make their beloved virtual characters more powerful or beautiful. What is worse, some of them may steal from their parents if they do not have enough money. Take my friend Micheal as an example. He was once a lovely boy with a kind heart. However, when he was addicted to League of Legends, another prevailing game, everything changed. He spent all his money earned from part-time on this game, and even stole money from his classmates. It is a shame for him that he is in jail now.
Admittedly, even though we testify to the drawbacks of computer games, it does not mean all computer games doing harm to children. Some games are good for children’s intelligence and mental health. For instance, chess. However, children may still become addicted to them if they are not controlled properly.
To sum up, playing computer games not only cost children much time, but also leads students to bad performance in school. In considering all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that children should not be allowed to play with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
...uter games when they have leisure time. recently, a controversial proposal was brought t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88143176734 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54812691363 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487695749441 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.33239631 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2413793103 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4137931034 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03448275862 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511998612668 0.236089414692 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13867723421 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139140950665 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331281598552 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176297554493 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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