Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Role model or heros, by definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they revels their nation and would be some impact their nation's people. It is typically disputed that for examine a nations always consider their general peoples rather then hero's or role model. I personally disagree with the statement and i feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, society mainly consist of various activitie's peoples.so, to determined society's character should be examine the character of general people rather then heros or role models. Although heroes or role models introduce their ntaions in outer world and sometimes impact on their nation's people but it does not mean that general people also showing the same things. For example, Bangladesh is a good cricket playing nation and has a number one all round player sakib al hasan and all over the world knows that bangladesh is a cricket frick nation. However, it is plausible that people like to playing cricket and enjoy lot but children of bangladesh and also all presents want to their childrea as a doctor or engineer. So, if someone think that aim of the children wanted to be a cricketer, that is actually wrong. Thus, determining societies character based on their hero's or role model does not hold water.
Secondly, assumption not to be capable to firgure out large number aspects. Moreover, people types of occupaional people consist of a society all and every one has impact their societydirectly and indirectly, also some senario like different states of a individual nation characterized and people known their own perspective values. For instance, silikon valey of USA well known all over world of their tecnological advances and their creativity. on the other hand las vegas of USA well known their negitive work like drags night clubing or adult doing. So, considerating to american society should to determined overal point of views, not any specific object.
Finally, it is true that role models reveal a society's highest ideas but to determined total society only based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soceity.heros and role model impact on a soceity directly or indirectly, Though, but society always make their consistancy by their gneral peoples work. For example like, Doctor mohammad younus is a naobel prize person and always people helps by his ASHA organization when BD's economy ws below the poverty line. now the condition of bd are progressive.
In conclusion, though some people believe that to understends of a nation needed to examine those nation's hero's or role models but i personally believe that general peoples are theprime factor for a nations examination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...heros, by definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they reve...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they revels their n...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'revel'
Suggestion: revel
... are well know all over the world, they revels their nation and would be some impact t...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... is typically disputed that for examine a nations always consider their general peoples r...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...s consider their general peoples rather then heros or role model. I personally disag...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sonally disagree with the statement and i feel this way for several reasons, whic...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'examined'?
Suggestion: examined
...determined societys character should be examine the character of general people rather ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... the character of general people rather then heros or role models. Although heroes o...
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Line 5, column 744, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...as a doctor or engineer. So, if someone think that aim of the children wanted to be a...
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Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o some senario like different states of a individual nation characterized and peo...
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Line 9, column 448, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ological advances and their creativity. on the other hand las vegas of USA well kn...
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Line 13, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...y, it is true that role models reveal a societys highest ideas but to determined total society o...
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Line 13, column 116, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... determined total society only based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some ...
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Line 13, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ly based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soce...
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Line 13, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...sed on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soceity.he...
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Line 13, column 496, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
... BDs economy ws below the poverty line. now the condition of bd are progressive. ...
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Line 17, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...neral peoples are theprime factor for a nations examination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09911894273 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64243106361 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517621145374 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6870924313 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.611111111 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7222222222 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21527555717 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783564257091 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107913402129 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133371463474 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667236710951 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.