a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. do you support or oppose the factory?
These days, factory is an integral part of industrial manufacturing. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support the plan to build a new factory in our community due to improving people living standard and bringing convenient facilities into society. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, a new factory contributes to improve the living standard. Although, some people claim that the factory would emit pollution in the town, it brings professions to a number of unemployed people in community. Many large factories with high manufacturing rate require a huge number of workers in the manufacturing processes and have various career’s positions. As people’s income increases from working in the factory, they will be able to spend money on their necessary things such as food, clothes, and housewares, and the quality’s life of majority people in community will be better.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is that a factory brings prosperity to the community. The new factory allows people in the community have higher income and outcome and draws people to move into the community. Consequently, with the increase of population and expenses, the community will build more infrastructures and convenient facilities. To illustrate this, Bangna, the community zone settled near the industrial manufacturing area, has developed numerous facilities, for example, streets and department stores, to support the population in last ten years from the factories building. Furthermore, the more workers in this community increase, the more houses need. Therefore, the community are motivated to have more real-estate development and intensely grow.
In conclusion, with the advantages and disadvantages of building new large factory, I support to build the factory because the factory will develop people’s living qualities by increasing employed people and lead more prosperity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69435215947 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17306881289 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3111821374 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242247934915 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911199018981 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644384759803 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173403719143 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055748683517 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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