a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
do you support or oppose the factory?
explain your position
With the advancement of technology, people will gain new needs and seek for better and easier lives. To achieve prosperity and convenience for all the people of a society, the economy should expand day by day. One of the best ways to attain such purposes is by building large factories. But this effort has its own advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Building a large factory will bring money to the community, and increase the level of prosperity and welfare for the people. When there is a big factory in the neighborhood, the potential or maybe the existing problem of unemployment will be solved. There will be good jobs and opportunities for people. Because there will be too much come and go to the factory, for example, lorries bring raw material regularly and take the constructed material for buyers and users, the transportation system will be improved and roads will be more attended, and even new roads may be made. It also helps the local business to grow. New shops and workshops will be opened to support some minor needs of the factory and its employees.
On the other hand, having a factory in the community can break the serenity and tranquility of the place. When a new factory is made, obviously there will be many more people in that region and therefore the place gets crowded. As a result, the level of safety may get decreased. Also, the traffic on the local roads will become worse. Eventually, this increase in the population and car traffic in the place in addition to the inevitable polluting characteristic of big factories will result in massive pollution of the whole environment which can lead it to an unbearable situation. It can get worse through time so much so that the native people cannot live there anymore and they will be obliged to migration.
In conclusion, I believe despite the fact that having a major factory may pollute the local environment and cause some problems, it can provide for local people and give them new opportunities for a better life. Also, it will be very beneficial for the whole society and the economy will improve. Who can ignore the advantages of having a large factory simply because of some drawbacks?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83727034121 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72051770445 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496062992126 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8655946432 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117878895471 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463484279678 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454789944339 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810129567552 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00596500291938 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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