A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near
your community. Discussthe advantages and disadvantages of this
new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the
factory? Explain your position
People prefer to live in a city which there are a lot of factories. Because they believe build factories near their community bring different job opportunity. It can be argued that the benefits of living near a factory are overweighed by the risks. Factories cause pollution and they bring too much growth. in addition, they destroy quiet lifestyle of a small town. As for writer opinion, I would oppose to construction a factory near my country. I will explore in the following paragraphs essay.
Factories cause smog. If we build a new factory, the air we breathe will be dirty. Everything will be covered by dust, for example, you have to clean your house every day because your furniture always is dusty. Water will be dirty to drink. The environment will be affected it means, for instance, rivers will be polluted which leads to hurt fauna and flora.
Some people maybe say that more jobs will be created by a factory. However, this can have negative consequences. The population will grow quickly because most the people come from other places to take a job in a factory. In addition, many new stores and homes will be built. There will be a lot of traffic on the roads. Fast growth can cause more harm than good and can act as a shock to individuals not a development.
Our city will change a lot. It is a pleasant place now. Everybody knows everybody. It is safe and quiet. If a factory brings growth to the city, all of those will change. The small-town feel is lost. The gentle lifestyle convert to a quick one. After a while, their job will be change because urbanization will take place. Moreover, in small-town you will save your money better because everything will be cheaper than a big city.
A factory would be beneficial in some ways but the dangers outweigh the benefits. Our city would be changed in order to construct a large company. I believe it is not necessary to build factories in any place and they have to limit some areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity which there are a lot of factories. Because they believe build factories near their...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...llution and they bring too much growth. in addition, they destroy quiet lifestyle ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63218390805 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55248124835 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8295155844 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7333333333 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143170279862 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387760652128 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506061158898 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883151431545 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492011251693 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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