A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discussthe advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
People like factories because they bring new jobs to a community. In my opinion, however, the benefits of a factory are outweighed by the risks. Factories cause pollution and they bring too much growth. In addition, they destroy the quiet lifestyle of a small town. That is why I oppose a plan to build a factory near my community.
Factories cause smog. If we build a new factory, the air we breathe will become dirty. Everything will be covered with dust. Factories also pollute rivers and streams. Our water will be too di11y to drink. The environment will be hurt and peoples health will be affected by a factory.
Some people will say that more jobs will be created by a factory. However, this can have a negative result. Our population will grow quickly. Many new homes and stores will be built. There will be a lot of traffic on the roads. Fast growth can cause more harm than good.
Our city will change a lot. It is a pleasant place now. It is safe and quiet. Everybody knows everybody else. If a factory brings growth to the city, all of this will change. The small-town feel will be lost.
A factory would be helpful in some ways, but the dangers outweigh the benefits. Our city would be changed too much by a factory. 1cannot support a plan to build a new factory here.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52991452991 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37702126868 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.1344086022 45% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.4833817968 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.7692307692 100.406767564 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.0 20.6045352989 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138079693801 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048330810786 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711248185693 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919592488427 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679333967761 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 11.7677419355 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 58.1214874552 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.22 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.0537634409 56% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.247311828 39% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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