A company has announced that wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages if this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
According to this subject I want to mention a famous proverb that says “every coin has to side” build a factory near my community also the same has some advantages and disadvantages, at the first, I want talk about advantages for example: job opportunity, economics boost. On the other hand, when they build a company near my community. It has some disadvantages. For instance, air pollution, traffic jam, crowded … but, I strongly agree to build a company in my community.
First of all, I would like to talk about economic boost when a company build near my community I must say it is a chance for my people to find new opportunities like jobs it is the most important thing. However, all my people live in difficult economic conditions like, jobless, social problem. All in all, back to the jobless and I believe that we should help government or private company to build a factory near my community.so, I support this statement that build a company near my community.
Second, when they build a company near my community. So, I strongly support that and I have my reasons. At the first, build a company near my community it helps my people have a great live with a shiny future with their family.so, they can work and make more money and build their community and solve some social problem like, help for poor people, build hospital, make new school. Therefore, we call this procedure economic cycle. So, I prefer to build company near my community and I believe it is really helpful for my community.
Last but not least, it is interesting if, they build two or three company near my community. Due to, we can have an advanced community or we can have more train, bus, tram, metro, big stadium, lux cars. On the other hand, it has some disadvantages for example: air pollution, population and traffic jams. But, I strongly support that statement “build a company near my community” as I mentioned at the first line, when they build a company we can have money and we can spend and build big stadiums for football, big salon for opera music. For these reasons I prefer to build a company near my community.
To summarize, I prefer to build a company near my community. On the other hand, I know that it has some disadvantages like increase of population, traffic jams, greenhouse gas, air pollution. So these thing are boring. But, when they build a company near my community has allot advantages like job opportunity, economic boost, build big constructions. So, for last reasons I strongly support this statement that build a company near my community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78747203579 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81984639913 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398210290828 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2899217296 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3181818182 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207489481861 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957668120244 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752603860653 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160198608193 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249343953702 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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