Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.
The university is an academic center the main responsibility of which is to prepare students for having both a successful professional and personal life. In fact, university form a fundamental part of persons' life and make students decide their path. As my point of view, building a new university has its own merits and demerits. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, new university will bring many advantages, the most important one is creating job opportunity for vast majorities of people in society who are looking for decent job. As human living in civilized society, we all need a well-paid job to flourish in our everyday lives, this concept has played a dominant role in individuals' way of living throughout history. Actually, building new university will provide fertile ground for people to gain a suitable career and reach their pinnacle of their job. In addition, providing new chances for getting job owing to the new university will definitely diminish the crime rate in every community.
On the other hand, construction of new building such as university is along with many drawbacks such as traffic jam and so forth. In fact, a plethora of people live in calm and tranquil community and they do not used to crowd society. By building new university myriads of people will commute long and short distances which certainly cause heavy traffic. Additionally, traffic not only will disturb people's lives but also will cause many diseases because traffic increase rate of air pollution. For example, last year a new university had built in our society and vast majorities of people complained and warned about the disadvantages such as traffic congestion or some overcrowded places. Now, all people in our society face various trials and tribulations and suffer from crowded society.
To wrap it up, building a new structures such as university will brings many prone and cons. In spite of different difficulties which may a new building brings, construction of new university will compensate different kind of lagging in every society such as creating job opportunities or even provide an opportunity for students to reach the tertiary education.
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...udents to reach the tertiary education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in spite of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289002557545 0.229887763892 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125319693095 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383631713555 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0306905370844 0.0685040099705 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0485933503836 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90033013073 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179028132992 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00255754475703 0.00188951952338 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.074168797954 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255754475703 0.0209618222197 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102301790281 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2220.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18384401114 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376044568245 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314763231198 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239554317549 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150417827298 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90033013073 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551532033426 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.0629390395 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4375 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4263076181 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.644075263715 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 53.9138231198 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.34615384615 1.45489161554 161% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41264558852 0.300154397459 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0994076236429 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581009862467 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537522781657 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124877852348 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169997899479 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622794473804 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357487986414 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0165938004191 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291221784607 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309055309351 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.