Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.
university not only benefit student by providing a quality education but also the community where it establishes. All the prospect have a both constructive and destructive facets; however, to examine which one is more dominant determine its applicability. Similarly, university may help some location with greater positive impact while other see its more detrimental output. personally, I believe in my location, university may provide good incentives than bad incentives in intensity.
To begin with, university saves a source as well as generate income within the community. In fact, it serves education for the local students where they can save their out going resources and may be potential business prospective for the local inhabitant. To relate this context, I want to share my personal experience to shed light on this issue. When I had to pursue my undergrad, I had to go far from my home. after going that place, I saw opening of various business by local like opening of hotel, stationary, pool house, etc. furthermore, after enrollment , m lot of friend belonged to this area by birth; they did not have to invest any money in logging and fooding. On the other hand, me including my several friends spent much of our money and had burden to stay in this area with frugality.
In addition, university may carry out development of physical infrastructure rapidly. Electricity, road, health, etc are well developed after the university development. furthermore, even the isolated part with poor access will be radically transform to more advanced cities. For example, during my sophomore year, I learned some fact about place where I study. The place, where then education hub, however before that in dilapidated condition with poor development. According to the local, this incredible was only after university formation; more people started business and government prioritized more budget for the infrastructure in this area. Thus, university may attract large interest of people and government to change the area with great facilities.
however, the university may disturb the vernal as well as pristine conditon of the locality. More people invade the area and more resource will be used up. In addition, certain pollution may be inevitable in the future. For example, during my visit in the bairahawa, I saw certain discrepancy between earlier time and after the university, in context of the environment. after university introduction, there was more waste materials in the university periphery; plus, there were more strident condition causing more disturbance in the society. however, the economic impact made obscure all the negative aspects. people enjoy more increase income and facility.
To sum up, although the university have some negative consequences in the environment, its economic impact on the local people out weigh all negative output.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, similarly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2448.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41592920354 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94740429568 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9090114121 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88461538462 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111312612238 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335136886699 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243485740493 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686498824482 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207785717557 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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