Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school Use specific reasons and examples to support your position | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a
foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
position.

Foreign language is useful for maintaining relationship with the diverse people. In light of technology, a world is constricting and people with different background in close vicinity. Since, learning a language other than native one is important, I agree with the statement that child should be taught a foreign language in their early age. I feel this way because in learning foreign language from childhood has relative advantages to adulthood and gain upper hand in the competition in their future.

First of all, learning starting from childhood is easy approach to learn anything, especially a non-native language. They are in verse of learning a new thing in their life, so learning a language in slow and steady will put off the pressure from them to learn. Furthermore, there have no fair of commiting mistake and their willingness to learn will not be haltered. However, learning a language in adult becomes painstaking. Many people gets embarassed to commit a mistake and consequently, lose their passion for learning a language as in their childhood. For instance, during the summer of 2013, I went to the institution to learn the french language. At that time, I was always confused about the certain words and felt embarrassed while commiting mistake. Everytime when I committed mistake, I felt stressed, angry and hesitated to clear out my doubt. As a result, I did not do well in the french language.

By learning a foreign language from child gives a upperhand in the global competition. Many universities and job company may resides in foreign country where high demand of language skills is required to be competitive candidate. Since having knowlege in particular language in prior time will makes them favourite to grab the opportunity. My personal experience is the epitome for this situation. Since our country has not enough and advance opportunity in engineering, we have to pursue our education in foreign university. At that time, our native language is not helpful and strong knowlege in english language is highly desirable. Gladly, I have been taught in my entire curriculum in english language since my childhood immensly helpful for me to have knowledge in the english. As compared to me, my friend, study majority of their previous course in native language, struggel a lot to be decent in the english.

In conclusion, having a knowledge of any language since childhood will be benefical to their career as more opportunity lies in the foriegn country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to start'.
Suggestion: to start
...heir future. First of all, learning starting from childhood is easy approach to lear...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tance, during the summer of 2013, I went to the institution to learn the french l...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing a foreign language from child gives a upperhand in the global competition. Ma...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s required to be competitive candidate. Since having knowlege in particular language ...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... particular language in prior time will makes them favourite to grab the opportunity....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91268081506 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.220490199 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180842922649 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585023176168 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546683446869 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112452444437 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734472703794 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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