Compare and contrast the advantages of choosing a stable career over an advanterous lifestyle. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
It's extremely hard to make a choice on how you will spend your life. In my case, when I had a dilemma on whether to choose a good and profitable job or spend every day in a new place by constant travelling, I prefered the second variant. For me money isn't everything and I am the type of person who can't stand spending time sitting at one place without moving a lot. It's much more important to gain new emotions and experience, not to regret anything during retirement. However, that desicion is followed by a great deal of disadvantages, which I will discuss further.
First and foremost, the most common reason for a majority of people to choose a stable working place is, undoubtedly, money. After you have signed a contract with a company, you get a guarantee from an employer that you will be provided with a particular amount of money monthly. When choosing a way of traveller, it's very complicated to have a constant, sufficient profit. However, with today's possibilities of working online it's much more easier to set up in another country and work distantly. Still, the types of jobs presented for freelancing is narrow and a vast amount of people won't be satisfyed.
Secondly, the very important point while setting up your preference is healthcare. It's well-known that in a majority of countries hospitals and doctors aren't free, and to cover a specific amount of money in receipt people need to have a well-paid job with insurance for healthcare. While visiting different countries, in case if something happens to you, it will require a lot of money to cover all costs. In countries like the USA, for instance, it will cost an unbelievable price, which is almost impossible to cover if you don't have health insurance or good salary. Therefore, an accident, which is happening constantly while travelling, can cause a doze of problems with curing.
Overall, if we consider both examples of waywards reasonably, it's obvious that a guaranteed working place with an insurance is the best choice for calm and stable life. Nevertheless, considering all disadvantages, I prefer constant travelling. It's so much fun to explore new places, to get acquainted with strangers and surround yourself with new emotions and experiences, that you tend to become a little bit reckless and start to ignore all pros and cons of stable job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...efered the second variant. For me money isnt everything and I am the type of person ...
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Suggestion: easier
...ossibilities of working online its much more easier to set up in another country and work d...
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...rity of countries hospitals and doctors arent free, and to cover a specific amount of...
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...ch is almost impossible to cover if you dont have health insurance or good salary. T...
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... experiences, that you tend to become a little bit reckless and start to ignore all pros a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89672544081 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8813324449 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556675062972 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.101911924 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780025891357 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260104664655 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291750131318 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495885634059 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142539958831 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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