If you could go to some time and place in the future, when and where would you go? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
If I could go to some time and place in the future I would choose a time range in 5 or 10 years. The first and the main reason for this is to take a slight look at my future, to know what skills I need to provide myself with. And the second one is to see what consequences the climate change will bring in 10 years or even earlier.
First and foremost, I would really like to know how my future will be established. I already have specific goals in perspective, and I do everything I can to achieve them. Nevertheless, it would be extremely helpful if I knew particular knowledge I need to obtain. And area of work which will take place in my future life. If I would have to choose a place to visit, it will definitely be my family house. I want to make sure that all of my family members are doing well. And if not, I would make everything possible to make the situation change when I got back to the present time.
The second reason for time travel is my concern about climate problems. Scientist have already predicted that approximately in 7 years the consequences from the bad influence we have on our planet would be inevitable. Luckily, nowadays scientists come out with new eco-solutions constantly. So, I believe that in some years we will be dealing with this situation successfully. Following this statement, to help scholars to find new solutions these days it would be very helpful to investigate technologies of the future. But, ecology situation which will take place in the future could be also disappointing and even tragical. That means that action should take place as fast as possible.
Overall, in my opinion we should always concentrate on our future, that is why I would never go to past years. For me, the most important points are my own achievements and my family. The second place takes the climate change, because it is the global problem which effects everyone and my family as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, really, second, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57101449275 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70469109461 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501449275362 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2733060758 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.85 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175217862984 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580378595506 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739922252381 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11566642321 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379474764928 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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