compare and contrast the knowledge that comes from books and experience
There are many pros and cons in learning from experience and learning from books. This matter whether people should focus on experimental knowledge or emphasize on theoretical knowledge, obtain from books, is a controversial issue among individuals. In my opinion, obtaining knowledge through experience, in contrast to learning from books, is more valuable. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, books are not always very up-to-date and this matter, especially in today’s world that everything is changing continuously, makes big problems. For example, I wanted to learn about a photo editing application last year. Because I did not have enough money to go to a class, I decided to learn independently and through a well-known book in that context. I started reading, and I learned the book completely. Although it was really great, it did not work for me. My application was the last version and the books were for the first version of the application.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uously, makes big problems. For example, I wanted to learn about a photo editing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, so, well, for example, i feel, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10119047619 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00989840006 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1044754472 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202693997187 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738165068884 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695912145842 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148783879638 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669449212175 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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