do you agree or disagree that friends have an impact on people
In today's world, with the advent of computer, internet, and social media, people communicate with other and make friends more than people who lived in the past. They not only make a vital contribution to development of our personality, but also play a significant role in our social life. This matter that how much people should be close to their friends is a controversial issue. Some individuals believe that they should always tell the truth to their friends while others think it is impossible to always be honest with friends. I totally agree with latter view. I will explicate my viewpoint through two outstanding reasons.
first of all, owing to the fact that people spend a lot of time with their friends, impact on behavior of each other is obvious and predictable. To illustrate this idea let's consider an example. When I was student at university, I lived at dormitory. I had many friends from different regions of my country. My roommates ,who were Turk and Kurd ,came from south and east of Iran. Due to diverse cultures, there were big amount of conflicts between us. I could not tolerate their belief and even I wanted to change my room. After a while, they have changed my mind about various subjects. I accepted their manner and behavior and they affected my attitude toward life, and it was because of the fact that we lived together for a long time.
Secondly, friends after family are very important for us. People communicate with some successful individuals that although they do not spend more time with each other, they have a pivotal effect on their life. For instance, one of my friends is a professor in business management. Even though I see her only once in a week, she has a constructive effect on my mindset toward various matters. For example, she is eighty years old but she wears colorful cloths and behaves like a young woman. This behavior changes my mindset toward the age and now I believe that age is only a number.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...media, people communicate with other and make friends more than people who lived ...
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...n our social life. This matter that how much people should be close to their friends...
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...rent regions of my country. My roommates ,who were Turk and Kurd ,came from south ...
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...ry. My roommates ,who were Turk and Kurd ,came from south and east of Iran. Due to...
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...nflicts between us. I could not tolerate their belief and even I wanted to change...
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...ted my attitude toward life, and it was because of the fact that we lived together for a long time. Sec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72807017544 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56171891834 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567251461988 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0907427379 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151391016689 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410248218306 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429145094708 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990817292996 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167907423706 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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