Compare and contrast the way of your life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for the next generations?
It is obvious to see the change in the lifestyle of the people in the passing time. People modify their habits of clothing, education, food style, etc respective to their present fit. Similarly, our parents and we have a difference in living the way of life and usually have a dissimilar perspective for living. I will delineate a few common living differences between us and parents in the following paragraphs.
First, today's people are carefree as they rarely care about the consequences of their actions. Unlike their parents, they are raised in the full of facility like food, good education, health facility, etc. due to which they unable to feel the fear of losing something as their all requirement gets fulfilled easily. Their minds focus mainly in the entertainment purpose such as watching movie, gaming, traveling, and many more. However. our parents' life was too challenging since they had to bear responsibility in an earlier age. That's why most of the life of our parents concentrated in the following a rule and custom of the society, earning a money no matter what the circumstances and afraid more for their future.
Second, a carefree nature help to groom the skills of our generation child. Many children is pursuing their dream of singing, dancing, acting, etc even though our society stress heavily for completing the study. In contrast, in the past generation, people subordinated with society and unable to break the chain of the rooted custom to refine their inherited passion. For instance; my mother has a very sweet voice and when she is singing, it is melodious and blissful to hear. As there was no support for her talent at that time, she was made to limited her talent within herself. Had she got the opportunity, she could have been an excellent career in the singing.
As the next generation is more liberal thought than ours, they are more suited to our type of living style. In this style of living, they are spare to can do an experiment in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, similarly, so, as to, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87390029326 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64895917637 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3942410817 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156365555709 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045482870777 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477688840899 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990885822569 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301716399623 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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