The harmonious relationship with other people is of essential significance, especially with the people we care about. The happiness from socializing with our closest friends and relatives would help keep us in a good mood. With regard to the ways to get along with others, some people advocate that we should be far away from the people we care about. As far as I am concerned, being away from others would damage our relationship with them.
In the first place, Keeping a distance with the people we care about means we would have little similar experience to share with each other. At present, with a tough workload, modern citizens have endured much pressure and they do not have to much time spent with their friends and family. If people are away from others intentional, the situation will become worse. They can not share the lattest happings in their lives, they do not have much in common. Conversations can not be preceded happily, and finally, the relationship can not bring happiness to people anymore.
Moreover, being far away from others can easily give rise to some misunderstand . When some misunderstand come up, peopel need to get together and have face to face chats. By being open and sincere to our friends and family, misunderstand can be eliminate quickly. However, if people are not open to each other , they think it is unnecessay to explain or just keep silent, which would easily lead to guesses . What's worse, people may lose trust with each other. For instance, I once had a good friend, who's name is Bob. We are extremely intimate. However, when some guesses arose, we did not explain too much. Finally, our friendship ended up . Therefore, keeping away from others could result in misunderstand and distrust.
Admittedly, keeping a certain with our friends or relatives can bring some freshness to both of us. We can be very polite to those people that we love. As people are always more polite to strangers than to our familiar people. However, being away from others cuts down the links between us, which could end friendship. The most intimate persons will no longer be at our side. Thus, the freshness and polite are just meaningless.
Everyone need the warm from our closest familiy and friends, keeping away from each other will defenitely damage our relationship. Thus, it is highly recommended that more time should be spent with the ones we love and everyone ought to keep a close link with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, with regard to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55715172473 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478365384615 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8792740864 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2592592593 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4074074074 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18518518519 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738501429611 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024712722703 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252374764321 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045034282894 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257044612775 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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