Being successful at work in school or just in our daily life depends on many factors. Some people think that creativity is essential to be successful in you field while others think that is not a crucial factor. I strongly believe that creativity is key to success for three compiling reasons.
Firstly, creativity makes work enjoyable, and motivating. Sometimes some employees express their hate towards what they do for a living, saying that their work is not enjoyable or simply not what they wanted to do in the first place. Some students complain about how school is boring for them. However, creativity can transform a simple job with simple tasks to a less boring one. But how can we do that ? Many tricks proved excellent for this matter. For instance a lot of call centers organize themed parties and events at work, like where your pajamas to work day, or during hallowing etc. As a result the employees enjoy their work and work space more and the companies become more successful. Another example is of teachers who decorate the classrooms with things students like or organize activities that student usually find amusing. So by creating a more pleasant environment for work can make a big difference.
Secondly, creativity makes the people around us appreciate our work and the effort we put in it. When you try to be creative and think out of the box while preparing a project at work, the project you are working on would definitely be more interesting than of others who just went with the first idea they had. Therefore, your boss would surely see the effort you did and the creativity you added to the concept. I still remember when I was at the university and we were assigned to read a huge documents about environment protection and summarize it. Instead of summarizing and write it in paper, my friend and i choose to transform it into a play and act it in front of our classmates. The teachers really loves the idea and prized us for it. Thus with a little bit of creativity we managed to get an A in that class.
Lastly, creativity is what makes us improve in our lives and think in a different way. Creativity helps us activate our brains and fertilize our minds. It actually push us ahead of others who think traditionally or just take things the way they are. People who are usually creative and can think of new things are really precious, a lot of big companies such as Google, Microsoft or apple, are always looking for creative teams to help them improve their products and be leaders in their fields. These companies usually provides their creative teams with everything they need, moreover, they offer them big salaries in exchange of their new ideas and creativity. Hence both the employees and the companies become more successful.
All things considered, we should all try to be creative, whether at work, at school or just with our families. Creativity has a big positive effect on our lives especially mentally, since it keeps our brains activated and fresh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7792706334 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58847920609 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487523992322 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6285693725 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6071428571 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.03571428571 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141279630245 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459611397075 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540655026324 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993396491822 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699252963189 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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