A lot of inventions have made our lives better, one of these inventions is the automobile. Some people think that the automobile industry has caused us more troubles than gave us benefits while others think that the automobile industry did us a huge favor. I personally, strongly believe that the automobile improved our lives to the better for three compelling reasons.
Firstly, automobile made our life easier when it comes to transportation. Thanks to the automobile industry we are now able to travel to further places comfortably and in a short time. The automobile industry is also improving day by day by including different services in the automobile such us air conditioning, GPS, bluethoot etc and producing different types of automobile to different buyers with different prices. The automobile industry has successfully managed to reach the costumers expectation not only when it comes to the quality aspect of the car but also the visual one.
Secondly, after the awareness of the harm the automobile fumes can cause to the environment many companies started working on electrical vehicles. One of the most famous electrical cars is « TESLA ». tesla has gained a lot of popularity when it was first launched, many people acknowledged the harm of car’s fumes and switched to electrical ones. Scientists were also working on bio fuels that can be used instead of the diesel. This bio fuel can be more efficient in two ways, the cars still work perfectly but most important without emitting harmful gases.
Thirdly, one of the problems that some people blame the automobile industry for is road accidents. With the amelioration of the automobile and its availability, more people are able to purchase a car. However the numbers of accidents has increased in a drastic way the last few years. Some people blame the automobile industry for that, but I firmly believe that it’s us to blame. Some people drive their cars carelessly and some others drink and drive. The real cause behind these accidence is not the automobile or it’s improvement but our ignorance and carelessness.
To conclude, the automobile invention was and will stay an important jump in the history of humankind. It’s something we cannot give up, but need to use carefully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...e automobile industry is also improving day by day by including different services in the aut...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'costumers'' or 'costumer's'?
Suggestion: costumers'; costumer's
...y has successfully managed to reach the costumers expectation not only when it comes to t...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tesla
...st famous electrical cars is « TESLA ». tesla has gained a lot of popularity when it ...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...more people are able to purchase a car. However the numbers of accidents has increased ...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a drastic way" with adverb for "drastic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the numbers of accidents has increased in a drastic way the last few years. Some people blame t...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this accidence' or 'these accidences'?
Suggestion: this accidence; these accidences
... drink and drive. The real cause behind these accidence is not the automobile or it's impr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16981132075 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92265332967 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525606469003 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6752624467 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243937338591 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726516084922 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585121896342 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132511714935 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660232503096 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.