Dancing plays an important role in a culture.
People in the various regions have specific behaviors and treatments, namely, type of cloth, food, cultivating, and so forth than the others region of the world, they are recognized as the culture of this region. One of finely excitement behaviors is dancing play which is people perform at the particular times of a year. On the contrary, a controversial question that raised about this issue are dancing plays have a crucial role in the people’s culture or not? My answer regarding question approximately is yes, and I will explain my reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, during mankind’s history, people do the wide range of traditional activities and ceremonies at the specific time of year as the time of a harvesting agricultural crop or doing a special feast depend on people’s belief. Typically, people performing every ceremony have conventional dancing plays which are very distinct from another region even the various regions of one country. For example, in my country, every state for thanksgiving ceremonies have different dancing plays from another state. Therefore, the difference of dancing plays can demonstrate the culture of every region, also some tourists from around the world are appealed to specific places for observing and enjoying unique dancing plays.
Secondly, throughout history, past people for indicating their feels and favorites did special activities as generating sounds like songs, dancing plays, hunting special animals as bears or tigers. Dances like tools for communicating with each other to show their feels even their needs before any language systems used among them. Many archaeologists find some painting on the cave walls show primitive people had done the different kind of dancing plays to show every state of their feeling as sadness, euphoric time, anxious. Additionally, some painting indicated that they used dancing plays as a language for establishing a path to connections for supplying their needs. Accordingly, Archaeologists conveniently describe the culture of every region with their dancing types that what they had done for their appropriate response to their senses and demands.
In summary, dancing plays not only help to distinguish every distinctive culture in every region, but also have a principal role for elementary people to demonstrate their feels about every situation, also have a connection between them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ood, cultivating, and so forth than the others region of the world, they are recognize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in summary, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48787061995 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90938107226 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530997304582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.105667149 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173365184967 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791572354038 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057016711633 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119849598522 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106806275564 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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