In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decision for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
There is no doubt that nowadays, parents can make decision for young people is very influential on them. A controversial question which is often raised this matter is which of young people who are living in the past or living now are more independent in their decisions? From my perspective, I firmly subscribe the first belief. In what follows, I will explain the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, in the contemporary, most of the young people like as an independent person, and living separately from their parents. In order to, every day, they confront very difficulties and predicament in the important stage of life of everyone. When young people who are taking decision without their parents sophisticatedly cope with this events, learn to how their behavior in this situation such as shortage money, lowest income, and even in the broken their love in the solitary. With this regard, they can pave the way for the prosperous shortly.
Secondly, making decisions is an important role in how one can manage one’s life through in several stages of one’s life. Everyone likes to choose their decision in the crucial and critical events in one’s life independently, which cause the young people can feel a freestanding and arbitrary choice in their ways. For example, when I was a young man, my father says go to university for completing my knowledge in the high degree. However, my favorite, I take to go a company for a high income and taking money, and then making a family to construct a life as an interesting life for my future’s live. In order to, every decision can provide a lot of experience whether can be suitable or not, although using them in the future’s life a very useful because it originates from lot of predicament situations which they have coped with them.
The last but not least reason is that, in the past, all of the members of family work together and help each other to reach goal to name but a quite few gathering crop, and take grazing cattle, cooking food for all of the members. On the other hand, nowadays young people are more effort and endeavor for themselves rather than to corporative in the family’s goal. In order to, with this opinion, young people tendency to generate more staffs for only their welfare in the taking a decision.
To wrap it up, it is my profound belief young people in today not only more tendency to take a decision independently to reach their goals but more like provide livelihood for their wellbeing as well.
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...livelihood for their wellbeing as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86078886311 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75219005411 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501160092807 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9106817334 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.235294118 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355245251362 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122475235372 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103887890065 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229785540816 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549786344482 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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