If you ask me “If you go to a deserted island, what would you take?” I will say “ a smartphone!” Hence, smartphones are the most important thing in my life. A lot of people probably think like me. From now, I will tell you the characteristics of my phone and the reasons why I think the phone is the most special.
First, I will tell you about my phone's features. My phone is an iPhone XR with a white phone case. On my phone, my favorite apps are Wechat, Instagram and Youtube. Although my phone battery runs down quickly, it is still useful. Also, the camera quality is not that good, but I like the mood of the camera. Sometimes it is fun to look at the pictures that I took with my friends.
Next, I will explain why the phone is the most special for me. The first reason is that the phone became a part of my body. Wherever I go, I always carry my smart phone, because I do not know when something will happen. Also, these days, we must need a smartphone when we buy something, this is because we should use Wechat money.
Lastly, I will tell you the second reason. Smartphones make me friends when I am bored. It is so fun that I do not get bored even if I just look at my phone all day. I can talk with my friends all night on my phone and there are so many fun Youtube videos. Especially, if you are stuck at home because of Covid-19 like now, the phone makes you less lonely and gets less bored.
Smartphones are my friend and part of my body. I have never imagined a life without a smartphone. Of course, smartphones take time and are bad for the eye, but my best thing is a smartphone!
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... you less lonely and gets less bored. Smartphones are my friend and part of my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, second, so, still, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17628205128 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39765656121 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.278936716 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0476190476 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074515773801 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268208730549 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382803937934 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503779272459 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377602809452 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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