Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
As we all know, every person in this world has his or her own right to get education.Nowadays, we have variety of methods of getting education,which is simple as a snap of a finger.However, this concept strongly depends on us, and it is our own choice to pick how and where to get education from.The education is the most essential concept in the world, and we all have to approach it with a great importance.Firstly, everyone has their own opinion about this concept, and it is biased to judge others for their thoughts.Everyday the world is developing by making changes in our daily life, and with these changes,our education methods develop too.With this growth various education systems, such as online learning, started to implement in some schools.Some may consider this as a significant education system, where you can sit whereever you want, and get basic education, which you need.Conversely, i assume that the rewards, which are acquired in the classrooms are more worthwhile.I strongly refute the concept of gaining education from online learning programs.The main reason which makes me to support the conventional classroom learning is that in actual learning places we can obtain specific skill or experience which is not available in online learning.This concept is emotion, and watching others actions towards specific events.While we go to the school, we can get enormous amount of emotions which are not accessible in the online education.For example, we can make lots of friends in traditional schooling centers, and by doing so we can acquire lots of satisfaction.Besides the emotions, i think the education in real classrooms are much superior.Because the concept of seeing teacher in front of you, gives an additional responsibility and importance.This factor makes old-school learning even more essential.To my mind, when a student gets education from online classes he or she does not feel that responsibility of learning or doing the homework.In contrast, at the school, students feel this responsibility and importance of making their homework.The main reason for this is that they do not want to get embarrassed in front of the classmates, which are in the classroom.Thus, almost everytime they try to accomplish the exercises, just to not be the source of laughter.In conclusion, i think these factors make conventional learning technique more vital and superior in contrast with online learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2961038961 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44388943359 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 385.0 20.1344086022 1912% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2039.0 100.406767564 2031% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 385.0 20.6045352989 1869% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 129.0 5.45110844103 2366% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161527329846 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161527329846 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161527329846 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 196.0 11.7677419355 1666% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -319.3 58.1214874552 -549% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 153.4 10.1575268817 1510% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.94 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.79 8.01818996416 334% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 156.0 10.0537634409 1552% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 156.0 10.247311828 1522% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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