Do you agree with the following statement, “A person should never make an important decision alone?
We are always facing different problems or situations that may challenge us. Taking an important decision can have a deep transformation to anyone’s life. Some people do not like to hear a second opinion because they try to avoid another person’s influence. However, I think that it is extremely important to hear someone who can help you.
First, when we are facing a special situation in our lives which forces us to make an important decision, it is excellent to have a second point of view. Sometimes we are just analyzing the best or the worst possibility during our choice. Due to a misunderstanding or an excitement moment, we can change our trajectory forever. Furthermore, if we have a chance to talk with someone who is not in the middle of the situation, he can show us the pros e cons about our next step. In my previous experience, every time that I had to choose a new avenue to take, I talked with my parents. They always showed me a second or third thinking about a subject, and, sometimes, I changed my decision for a prime one.
Secondly, nothing can be so new, that nobody could have lived before. Consequently, it is not impossible to find someone who was at the same situation that we are living now. These people can be extremely helpful when we are making our decision. Additionally, they can weigh with you all good and bad situations, putting them on a scale to make the best choice. When I had to decide about moving from Brazil to the United States, I talked with four friends who had lived the same situation in their lives before. As a result, I think that I could understand better what would come in my family’s future.
To conclude, although every day we are making a few decisions in our lives, some of them can be of great importance. Because of this importance, I believe that we need good people, such as family or friends, to help us. They can make our future easier and greater, due to a different approach or a previous experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
We are always facing different problems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81741573034 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57988509075 2.67179642975 134% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9894123235 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2631578947 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12018607856 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421798075047 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410076550853 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882979222946 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422400449519 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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