Do you agree or diagree with the following statemnt?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples.
While many people think that seeing the various sides of the world is possible only by traveling to foreign countries, I firmly believe that one can travel within its own country and be benefited equally as if he were traveling outside of the country. I think that traveling inside your own country has two main advantages.
First, traveling in own country is always interesting, because even very small countries are various in different regions. Exploring the micro differences of the nature, alterations of culture and people is always exciting and informative. My travel experience is a great example of the benefits of inside-travel. When I was a child I started to explore my country and after few trips I realized that I cou;d do it forever. Even such a small country like Armenia has its own colors in different regions and cities, the music, dances and overall culture is chaning at every step. That fact has led me to have the opinion that traveling in own country is not boring and is even more enjoyable.
Another main reason for inside-travel is the educational and emotional changes it can make. Traveling is always about meeting new people in different situtions. Meeting someone from your country and with the same nationality who is meanwhile too different from you is always educating and can open the other unseen aspects of the world. The example of my friend is quite interesting at that point. He always lived in a big city and never traveled to the villages of Armenia. Once when he came with me hiking, we met an old man near one of the villages, we had a conversation with that man, and that caused some philosophical and behavioural questions by my friend. Later it helped my friend to understand many things which didn't even bothered him earlier.
That is why I think that traveling and meeting new people is very educating and interesting.
Taking into account the reasons mentioned above and in respect of my own experience, I completely agree that people can benefit more from inside-travel no matter in what country they live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87784090909 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7409163934 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542613636364 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3392579607 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 5.45110844103 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338887584303 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10847108927 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766115608716 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19914376666 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606943294941 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.