do you agree or disagree that the families shall allow to their kids to play computer games

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people have different opinions about whether they should allow to their kids ...
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...ether they should allow to their kids to play electronic games or not ,from my p...
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...r kids to play electronic games or not ,from my point of view that if the paren...
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...nic games or not ,from my point of view that if the parent shall agree to let th...
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...ill lead to positive outcome therefore i totally agree with this statement owing ...
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...asons which i will explore them below: first it is safer to the kids to stay ...
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...ill explore them below: first it is safer to the kids to stay at home...
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...er to the kids to stay at home and play than go outside ,specially today a lot ...
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... stay at home and play than go outside ,specially today a lot of accident can t...
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...side ,specially today a lot of accident can the kid vulnerable out of their hous...
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...r houses like car accident or kidnapping ,as well it is more easy to families ...
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...check and control what they are watching and with whom they usually meet while ...
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...are watching and with whom they usually meet while if our kids choose to play o...
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... and with whom they usually meet while if our kids choose to play out side it w...
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... meet while if our kids choose to play out side it will be hard to their families to se...
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...ll be hard to their families to see them . research approved recently th...
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...ard to their families to see them . research approved recently that the ki...
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...o their families to see them . research approved recently that the kids who p...
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...families to see them . research approved recently that the kids who pla...
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... research approved recently that the kids who play game become smarter th...
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...ing computer games cause they can learn a lot of trick and strategies through the videos games...
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... and strategies through the videos games however some people think that sitting ...
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...deos games however some people think that sitting long time on the computers ...
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...ters will make the child less social but this is not point because the parent ...
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...ill make the child less social but this is not point because the parent can co...
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...arent can control the time of playing , study , and family . finally...
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...n control the time of playing , study , and family . finally with t...
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...e time of playing , study , and family . finally with the developmen...
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... time of playing , study , and family . finally with the development...
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...the development and advance technologies it become very necessary to the kids t...
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...evelopment and advance technologies it become very necessary to the kids to master...
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...nd advance technologies it become very necessary to the kids to master softwar...
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...t become very necessary to the kids to master software devices specially toda...
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... to the kids to master software devices specially today computer or videos gam...
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...s to master software devices specially today computer or videos games being ex...
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...ces specially today computer or videos games being excellent career and person ...
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...he videos game software and he knows how the software develops . to close co...
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...g the points mentioned above allowing to our kids to watching video game will le...
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... allowing to our kids to watching video game will lead to a positive result and...
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...deo game will lead to a positive result and based on that i strongly agree with...
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...o a positive result and based on that i strongly agree with the statement
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69072164948 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31386859093 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.420954305 48.9658058833 475% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.25 100.406767564 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.6045352989 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.45110844103 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 65.0 5.5376344086 1174% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366254057045 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204194994863 0.076458572812 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942164057125 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178596746375 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728199424135 0.0645574589148 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 58.1214874552 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.