Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university.
Today, knowledge and science play a vital role in human life for different are such as work and personal life. Humankind pays attention more and more to education for every stratum of society. University is one of the best places to learn plenty and a wide range of knowledge that everyone wants to learn and use it for their professional career. The government should invest in university facilities, equipment, and knowledge of their faculty to prepare their best efficiency and effect for a treat and educate of the next generation of people to make their society and community. I completely agree with this statement that everyone should have a break for nearly one year to prepare for university. I am going to elaborate on my perspective for the following reasons.
Firstly, the financial aspect of every object is one the most critical aspect that not inevitable to not concern. One of the best destinations for a college education in the USA that attracts a lot of students around the world. Unfortunately, almost of universities not only private universities but also state universities have great tuition to pay by students or their families. I believe that a clever student maybe wants to prepare for this financial problem by finding a job before entering university. For example, when I want to enter for a master's degree my family did not have decent money for supporting me but I had to work to provide some part of the budget for my education. finally, I think it is difficult for me to work but I can get my self-confidence and dignity that are very invaluable for me.
Secondly, I am believing that taking a job before entering university is better for everyone to prepare for their future work.
I think the job broadens my horizon to my professional career that I can select my way or path to follow for the future. Moreover, I can build my perspective and resume or develop my path that noticed former in the university. My mind is very will be prepared to select knowledge I maybe need for my career in different courses and workshops during my education. The university is the best place to learn the different subjects from basic to advanced form that will shape my mind for work and be a creative entrepreneur in the future.
finally, I think everyone needs a little time to be free from strict roles for education after high school cause university students must have a lot of assignments and projects during a semester. It is better for students to have some entertainment and joy to release their tension and stress for study. Graduated high-school can refresh their mind by doing interesting hobbies, sport, or others during this time.
In conclusion, I definitely agree that student needs a break before entering university and built and prepare their mind for upper education in the university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...me part of the budget for my education. finally, I think it is difficult for me to work...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...re very invaluable for me. Secondly, I am believing that taking a job before entering unive...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... creative entrepreneur in the future. finally, I think everyone needs a little time t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85330578512 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83381533578 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456611570248 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7110989515 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118487738182 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458477107036 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423330633354 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822380125477 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298350973412 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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