Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is the most important part of everyone's life. Everyone goes through many courses during school time regardless of what they are interested in or what they want to study as a major field in the future. They are some common things like different kinds of science, art, literature, and history that teachers teach their students in school years. When the students enter university they are free to choose what they want to study and be experts in that field. So, they are actually eager to have courses related to their major. Some people believe it would be better all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is, but others, including me, reject this. In this essay, I am going to explain the potential three reasons to support my idea.
First of all, the university is a place that students want to study their interesting field. As a person, I know, knowing about your past and studying history is valuable and worthy, but forcing students to take a history course is not a good idea. It is better to encourage students to take a history course as an optional course. So, people who participate in a history course will learn a lot and the course will be more effective in comparison with those who are forced to take it just because of grade or obligation.
Secondly, university students want to be expert in one thing instead of knowing everything basically. Actually, in my opinion, the purpose of going to university is to take special courses in the field we want to become an expert. therefore, taking courses that are out of student's interest, probably make students reluctant to follow higher education. For example, in my university years, in the first semesters, we had to take irrelevant courses like history and it really made me disappointed. I wanted to learn more about my major as soon as possible but we just took specialized courses in later semesters.
Finally, the last thing I want to mention is that we already learn enough about history in school years. If the purpose of the obligation of taking history course in the university is just knowing about our past, so we have adequate knowledge. So, it is better to make it an optional course for those who are really enthusiastic and eager to learn more about history.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, I totally disagree with the idea of all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is and also it is better to be an optional course for willing students.
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Suggestion: Therefore
... the field we want to become an expert. therefore, taking courses that are out of student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7533632287 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5580277171 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434977578475 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6835209204 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385682722908 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128361239784 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108039123668 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251386109309 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119378421318 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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