Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many believed truth between two person are the pillors of any relationship.In my opinion the people who are more honest in their relationships to have better chances of a good relations.This essay will discuss why being honest can lead to a healthy relation.
Respecting each other is the most important part of a relationship if a person lies that shows that he doesn't have much respect for other person.This dishonesty can lead to a unhealthy corelation between two person.for example,most of the divorce cases in the USA happen because one of the partner hid or lied about something which lead to a having trust issues and fights and in the end divorce.For all these reasons i believe that not telling someone the truth can hurt other person very bad which may jeopardize the whole realtionship.
Another reason is making other feel important and part of one's life.Telling truths about your lives,this way you can show the other person their importance in your life and make them feel special.Telling truths in a relation shows how much you trust them this in turn will form better and strong understanding with very less or no trust issues between them.for instance, people often tells about their life to the person they are closest to like best friend,partner,parents etc.,this is because of the fact that they have a very good understanding with them and can trust them even with their deepest truth.
In conclusion,respects and trust are the two most important aspects of a realtionship and if one wishes to build good relationships he should follow these and avoid being dishonest which can prevent or harm a healthy relation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99635036496 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06889171022 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.1344086022 338% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.423676641 48.9658058833 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.25 100.406767564 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.5 20.6045352989 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.45110844103 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180422954056 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109511095342 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024746892462 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109511095342 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024746892462 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 11.7677419355 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.1575268817 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.0537634409 290% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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