Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Through history, communication has played an important role in all societies. Some people believe that one of the most important factors which can make a good relationship between society members is telling the truth. If people do not say the right word together, their relationships will not be healthy. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that telling lies is inevitable in some situations. I personally contend that the latter is more effective in our relations. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that telling the truth sometimes may have a reverse effect on our relations. People in some situations are more satisfied to hear wrong words from us. I think sometimes it is more profitable in our relationships than telling the truth. For instance, I have a friend name Ali who always tell the truth due to his religious beliefs. Although many people know him as an honest and trustable person, he become an isolated person in community. He tells something which are not pleasant for his audiences. Last week, after two weeks of absence in his wok, he told the boss that he did not come to work because he had a job interview in another company and they rejected him. The result was clear, the boss fired him. So, if he told his boss that he was sick, he had a family problem, etc. the boss would not fire him, and Ali could easily continue his job.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that while most of community tell lies, we had to tell the wrong words in our contacts. It is an accepted theme that everything tell lies. When you want to buy a house, the real estate tells exaggerated words about that, when you have an office work, the jobholders put off you, even Medias and the government tell us falsehood words.
In conclusion, although that’s not a good explanation for us to tell the lie, I think we have to act according to a famous proverb in our country and be of the same color as the congregation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
...atisfied to hear wrong words from us. I think sometimes it is more profitable in our relationsh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69337016575 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61869856725 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560773480663 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8267897524 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.95 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208405583397 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063314210985 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631793331003 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12042541017 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733133209874 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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