Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words, do not use memorized examples.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful, etc in any relationship. Everyone desires to have a certain percentage of characteristics of the above points in their partners in order to make their relationship delightful. Personally, in my mind, I agree with the above statement of always speaking the truth in order to make relationships futuristic. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Honesty or truthfulness makes the relationship much stronger and believable. In other words, honesty between the partners makes their relationship to the next level and they totally rely on each other. Consequently, in any relations, speaking the truth or presenting honesty to each other makes the love much deeper. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was in class ten, I got really poor marks in mathematics. I got really depressed about how to speak in front of my parent. Some of my friends suggested me to present the fake report in front of my parent but my heart did not allow that. I made a decision to speak honestly before the parent and if the situation turned worse, I would beg in front of them to do my best in the next test. Finally, I told my family about the result and unexpectedly they praised me for telling the truth. My father decided to put the tuition of mathematics from my math inspector. If I had not told them the truth, I would have regretted all over my life.
Furthermore, speaking truthfulness provides respect in society. Evidently, society praises us in front of other people by providing examples of ourselves in following the moral principle. In short, honesty in our behavior leads us to live useful life in society. For example- Michael, one of my friends of mine is known to be the honest person in our village. He has a moral principle of speaking the truth whatever will be the consequences. He never tells lie. However, some of his friends including mine has been addicted to drugs. And when Michael knew about this behavior of his friends, he decided to tell the truth to their friends. Some of the friends scolded him not to tell the truth but, in order to improve the behavior of his friends, he tell their parents about their children's latest addiction. Similarly, their parents decided to put them into Rehab centers in order to improve their life. This attributes Michael to receive the valuable citizen award of our village. If he had not decided to tell their parents about their behavior, his friend’s life would have improved.
In conclusion, to my mind, speaking truth brings the relationship much stronger and builds prestigious life in the society. This is because people respect the person being honest and truthful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
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Suggestion: childrens the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, honestly, however, if, look, may, really, similarly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in short, in other words, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91803278689 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85986883818 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477459016393 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2548662878 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129064321503 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362921001626 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324416477233 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797799280147 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290435998027 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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