Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People like to have relationships with others and they prefer to keep and strengthen these relationships. Then, they are coerced to disguise the truth in some conditions. Some people claim that telling lies is not acceptable in relationships. on the contrary, others assert that this concealment can be useful in some cases. strongly believe that telling the truth is not necessary for any relationship because not only does it help people keep their relationships, but also it prevents some unfavorable events.
One of the primary causes is that concealment of truth preserves a relationship in some conditions. people like to maintain their relationships with others. then, sometimes they prefer to hide some truth to preserve or strengthen their relationships. For example, when people borrow a device or an object from their friends, and that device becomes defective spontaneously; in these situations, people prefer to disguise the truth and repair that device not to aggravate their friends. likewise, some governments prefer to hide true events in some situations to keep social discipline. for instance, when society deals with economic conflict; in these conditions, some governments tell lies to people about the future. they hide realities and broadcast some promising news to keep the social spirit.
but there is a furthermore subtle point we must consider. in some conditions, concealment of truth prevents some hardships especially some kinds of emotional problems. for example, when a doctor visits a person that encounters a cureless disease; in these cases, the majority of doctors prefer not to tell the truth to that person because they know that negative emotions can intensify that disease. therefore, this concealment of truth can help people to enjoy the rest of their life. similarly, when infants lose their parents and some families adopt them as their children. in some conditions, the secondary families prefer to hide the truth and pretend that they are the real family of that infant. the revelation of these kinds of events can cause some emotional problems for that child in the future.
in conclusion, both preventing some detractive events and consolidating relationships force people to conceal the real events or truth in some situations. I strongly recommended that people are not compelled to tell truth in all situations because these revelations of truth can cause some hardships, and concealment of truth can prevent them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the contrary, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35218508997 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92942745123 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434447300771 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8359526429 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130217133808 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548086166769 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405137979777 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105556105979 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329322840008 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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