Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In todays convoluted world , we do not disregarded our old friendships that we have in our lives .Controversy exists over whether keep our old friendships is of paramount importance in our lives. In my vantage piont, every people should keep this as a role in their lives because not only can it cement our relationships and we do not need to make confidence between each other ,but also we shared part of our lives with them.
First of all, keeping an old friendships can make for us an opportunity to cement our relationships. That is to say, when we keep an old friends we do not need spend our time to introduce ourselves to each other or we talk about what we want in our frinedships by stay in old friendships we could cement our relationships and boost up our friendships .If the people keep an old friendships they do not need to make trust between each other .For instance , one of my friend left her old friends and she make new friends after that she got hit and she was very upset because she was made trust to them very soon and she regretted. Therefore, it is vey essential to stay in old friendships to do not be traumatized and cement our friendships.
Second reason is that , friend is one of the most precious gift in our life. That is to say , when we keep an old friends in our life's we know we have a person that everytime we want to talk about every secret part of our life's are exist or we can apply money from them and back them their money on every month or every year . The old friends can support us in each aspect. For instance , one of my friend have an old friendship with their friends .They are talking about a lot of things that every normal friendships do not speak and they are supporting each other in everytime that they need . Therefore , an old friends are of paramount importance in people's lives to telling them their secret or talking to them .
All in all, keeping this role that frienships with an old friends is of paramount importance for people's lives since they could cement their friendships also do not need to make confidence between each other and they have a very close friends to telling a secret part of their lives. It is predicted that keep an old friends is more important .
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...at keep an old friends is more important .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, talking about, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44390243902 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53253209671 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.370731707317 0.524837075471 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.406148174 48.9658058833 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.833333333 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1666666667 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206474724664 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121514095625 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655558879355 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161739028801 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514532656655 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.