Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's convoluted world, we do not disregard the old friendships that we have in our lives. Controversy exists over whether keeping our old friendships is of paramount importance in our lives. From my vantage point, every people should keep this as a role in their lives because not only can it cement our relationships and we do not need to make confidence between each other, but also we shared part of our lives with them.
First of all, keeping an old friendship can make for us an opportunity to cement our relationships. That is to say, when we keep old friends we do not need to spend our time introducing ourselves to each other or we talk about what we want in our friendships by staying in old friendships we could cement our relationships and boost our friendships. If people keep an old friendship they do not need to make trust each other. For instance, one of my friends left her old friends and she make new friends after that she got hit and she was very upset because she was made trust to them very soon and she regretted it. Therefore, it is very essential to stay in old friendships to not be traumatized and to cement our friendships.
The second reason is that friend is one of the most precious gifts in our life. That is to say, when we keep an old friend in our lives we know we have a person that every time we want to talk about every secret part of our lives are exist or we can apply for money from them and back them their money on every month or every year. The old friends can support us in each aspect. For instance, one of my friends has an old friendship with their friends. They are talking about a lot of things that every normal friendship does not speak and they are supporting each other every time that they need. Therefore, old friends are of paramount importance in people's lives to telling them their secrets or talking to them.
All in all, keeping this role that friendships with an old friend is of paramount importance for people's lives since they could cement their friendships also do not need to make confidence between each other and they have a very close friend to tell a secret part of their lives. It is predicted that keeping an old friend is more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elationships and boost our friendships. If people keep an old friendship they do n...
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Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...my friends left her old friends and she make new friends after that she got hit and ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...bout every secret part of our lives are exist or we can apply for money from them and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, talking about, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44254278729 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48983562682 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366748166259 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4488079152 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193605747544 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100004663534 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540352054446 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150779747843 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433217671063 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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