Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world, we do not disregard the role of moving from one place to another place. Controversy exists over whether moving from one place to another is better than living in one town. From my vantage point, migrating from one place to another is of paramount importance in our life because not only can it provide us opportunities for advances, but also it boosts the quality of living.
The first point that should be mentioned here is that moving from one place to another cause provides us opportunities for advances. That is to say, every people migrate to another place to progress their knowledge and have opportunities for advances. For example, every year there are thousands of students go to foreign countries for studying and living there with a lot of nostalgia. In this part of their lives, they learn how could they use their opportunities to progress their abilities and the government of foreign countries provides them a piece of very good equipment to raise the science of their country. Therefore, moving to another place leads to having a better life and provides them opportunities for advancement.
Another point that should be mentioned here is that moving from one place to another lead to a boost in their quality of living. That is to say, migrating from one place to another provides facilities for better living. For instance, students going to another place they have a lot of equipment for their student life like cheap transportation or the government or university giving students funding to live better so they can boost up the quality of living because they do not have any issues to prepare their living expenses so there is no mental pressure on them. Therefore, mental health will lead boost in the quality of living.
All in all, we do not ignore the key of moving from one place to another since it can provide us opportunities for advances and it could boost the quality of living. Who can ignore the prominent role of migrating to another place?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85422740525 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.621985043 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405247813411 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7399617873 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267608616619 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135341547925 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097155321778 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209426871361 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811880727347 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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