Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans have the desire of being held accountable by someone. This is why they look for partners in their lifetimes with whom they can establish strong relationships. Relationships, though, are very fragile and are susceptible of being broken. Some of the causes of friendship breakage are: distrust, dishonesty, and incomprehension. Always telling the truth is the most important factor to consider in a relationship because it allows partners to trust each other and have healthy lives as it improves one’s mental and spiritual health.
First, honesty establish a relation of trust between people. When two individuals are always honest with one another, they are more likely to rely on each other. For instance, my cousin Anne was told that her husband was caught in a position of adultary with another woman in his office. She took the information with a grain of salt. As soon as the spouse arrived at their home, he explained to her the reason behind his being in a position of adultary, which is that he wanted to defend himself from going to jail. Michel had never lied to her. Aware of that, Anne trusted him. Anne's trust in her husband conserved their relationship, for many women in her community leave their spouses after receiving such information.
Second, telling the truth improves people's mental and spiritual health. It is integral that people in a relationship feel comfortable in order to enjoy their lives. Lying compromises the happiness that people have from being honest. For example, back in high school, I would lie to my friend that I knew how to drive. Many times, we had a car in front of us and needed someone to drive. In such circumstances, my friends always asked me to drive. I felt uncomfortable to tell them that I could not and found an excuse. Be that as it may, I always felt guilty and unhappy when I met with my friends because I associated their presence with a trial to drive. Lack of honesty is detrimental to a relationship; that is, honesty is key for healthy relationships.
In conclusion, telling the truth is the most important aspect of relationship. Being truthful reinforces trust in relationships. Also, honesty brings peace in people's heart, in addition to enhancing their mental and spiritual health, in their relationships. Everybody should consider building friendships basing on honesty as the most important criteria.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...lf from going to jail. Michel had never lied to her. Aware of that, Anne trusted him...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01763224181 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91005366563 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544080604534 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9672315111 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2692307692 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147380650387 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424365405688 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555613102337 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974587848051 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023818391384 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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