Relationships have a tremendous impact on our progress and well-being. In fact, it can enhance our success in immeasurable ways because it encompasses our cores. At the same time, saying truth is the key to unlock the world and having a strong and great relationship. So I strongly agree that telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationships.
First and foremost, saying the truth has a crucial significance to have a strong and life-term relationship with friends and family. Needless to say, family and friends are an integral part of life. The stronger the relationship, the better the life everyone got. For example, if two couple stayed with each other for a long time and they always telling truth, and one time abruptly, one of them lie for any reason, this would lead to broken the trust tie between them. In the sense that they lost their great relationship and life would be totally different with no trust. Although they might forgive each other, still it would be no trust. Consequently, telling the truth has an important rule to save the relationship between families and friends.
Secondly, any relationship builds both literally and figuratively on honesty. Admittedly, at work, the most important bond is, to be honest, and tell the truth, even when it's going in the opposite side of someone sake. For instance, if there was a problem at work and the manger completely trust the employers, the problem would solve directly, without losing time and money due to the fact that the employers work with honesty. As a result, telling the truth has a great impact on the work relationships also, because it would help everyone to save time and money and give great results.
Due to the aforementioned, I totally believe that any relationship builds on the truth, so the truth is the safety boat for all the relationships in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8832807571 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83353464565 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517350157729 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2489442447 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223751396211 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805024386639 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704871701118 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139998308073 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172089452711 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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